Monday was the final critique before the final hand in. We first started with a lecture on Tip mounting and printing for the following class on thursday.
Final Feedback given by Jackie:
- Playdough doll is working more than the lunch boxes, it gets the message accross more
- use bolder, bigger font for Pick up stick poster.
- Having the stats as headline works well with the hands demonstrating it but gets away a little bit from the child's game idea.
- "poverty is no child's game as headline" works well too, nice use of white space, possibly better than stats because less confusing for the audience. it is a more traditional approach than the stats as head line.
- play dough poster: is the tear necessary ? does it get a bit too sentimental ? ( personal preference).
- like the font used ( I however wanted to use a rounder font, more hand written to match the imagery more, Futura looked a bit out of place to me.)
over the next few days I will try and find the adequate font for my play dough poster
- try the have the doll without the tear to see the comparison
- increase the point size of the font for my other poster
- i think I will use "poverty is no child's game" as my head line for the first poster in order for it to flow better and get the message across, otherwise it might be too subtle.
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