In today's studio we all had to pin up our posters ( at least of the two) to get a one on one critique on it before and after we had done more work on it.
poster 1:
feed Back:
- hands stand out too much, make them more blend in with the background.
- maybe have more neutral colours for the background and hands
- make the sticks bigger, to give them more emphasis,
- play around with the tag live as head line and vice versa
- Type doesn't have to be that thin, look into another type, not readable enough from far away.
poster after refinment:
- stop using drop shadow, looks a lot better
- background a lot better but yellow looked good, look into incorporating yellow background with the hands blending in. ( maybe half tone? )
- maybe have the sticks representative of the stats ( 4 sticks in one hand and 1 stick in the other),
- sticks are too big.
- fill the space well, elements do not fit well together yet.
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